Hi guys, This is my first SCP, I would like you to let me know what you think of it as well as give me some ideas because I am running out. Also included in this SCP I have made the beggining of the a seprate Document for Subject 12 (you will read about him in this). I know that there are a fair amount of grammer and spelling mistakes and I am working on those, so please I would appreciate it if you did'nt point out spelling mistakes, grammer ones are fine. Also I have only used "[DATA EXPUNGED]" because I dont know what the diference between that and "[REDACTED]" is, if someone could explain that to me, that would be great. In short I am looking for ideas and and for a review on what you think of what I have so far, I think it's pretty good for being both my first SCP AND my first willingly done piece of creative/story writing. Anyway, I have rambled for long enough, so please, sit back and enjoy the read!!
SCP draft 1